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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:01 pm | |
| Sorry about that pause i was cleaning the kitchen!
The dark lord looked at him and let out a deep sigh! "i am no lord of kanush i am just some scientist who was fired and now i want to take over new york! Then his eyes narrowed and he said very angrely "AND YOU HAVE GOTTEN IN MY WAY" then he jammed his shoulder into pters neck.... | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:22 pm | |
| oh ok at least you are back.
peter stagered back as the dark lord aka the scientist puled his cloke back on "And now." the scientist said "You know to much and must die!" | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:36 pm | |
| But peter dodgedthey beam that came at him and kicked the dark lord where he thought his head would be! the dark lord fell backwards again but this time grabbed on to the machine to steady himself but the machine toppled on top of him! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 12:44 pm | |
| but befor the machine sqwished him he vanished into thin air. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 2:49 pm | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:45 pm | |
| it is not magic it is a hologram the big machine is the hologram progector it somehow makes the hologram solid when the machine dose not make the hologram solid things like bulits pas through it like erleir in the book when the machine broke it turned off the hologram. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:51 pm | |
| Oh! well then heres a continuation!
Peter gasped and looked around the room! he seen that the machine had been destroyed and that the scientist was no where to be found! he walk around the room untill he found a sectret door he pushed on it and it opened! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:55 pm | |
| as he crawled through the small door he saw that he was in some sort of controle room and he was behined 2 men at a larg screen and next to them was the sientist | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 4:58 pm | |
| He looked at peter and screamed! he pulled out a machine gun and started shooting at peter. peter was able to dodge and hit the scientist in the gut! | |
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dragon, slayer! Squire
Posts : 132 Post Level : 5522 Join date : 2010-05-21
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:05 pm | |
| the dark lord held his stomac for the inpackted. on of the of the other to men pulled out a pistle but peter a walky talky and thourgh it at the man with the pistle then he other man grabed the walky talky and yelled "we need reinforcements! | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:27 pm | |
| But he did it in vain! for the walkie talkie was peters! then peter kicked him in the gut and grabbed the scientist by the head and pushed him to the ground! | |
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dragon, slayer! Squire
Posts : 132 Post Level : 5522 Join date : 2010-05-21
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 6:56 pm | |
| now the scientist was not able to get up. peter got out of the conterol room and grabed the roep that he had been tied in then got in the room again and tie all three | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Thu Oct 21, 2010 7:07 pm | |
| then he pulled off the cloak of the scientist and asked him "where are we?" "the scientist sneered and said "to the left there is a door go through it and you can find you way out from there! but when peter looked through the door he seen sky! They were flying! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Fri Oct 22, 2010 7:35 pm | |
| peter backed away from the door and turned to the sientist who was now laughing at him sudenly the plane shook and then started to role throwing peter out the door wich was still open. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sat Oct 23, 2010 11:53 am | |
| peter grabbed on to the edge and pulled himself up then shut the door behind him! but the scientist had untied himself and attacked him! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sat Oct 23, 2010 3:10 pm | |
| the plane shook again throwing them both against the wall. one of the guards puled out his gun and shot peter in the head. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sat Oct 23, 2010 7:09 pm | |
| uuuuuhhhhh im lost peter cant die! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sat Oct 23, 2010 8:34 pm | |
| ok i will go next.
as peter stood up the bullit passed right through his head and hit the wall behined him. the sientist then realised what had happend peter had somehow fixed the hologram progector and knew how it werked. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:23 pm | |
| then suddanly the scientis was hit in the head by peter and fell down uconsius! then there was a crash as door flew open! they had hi the side of a mountain and were falling. peter ran to the controlls but he was to late the plane struck the mountain and there was a large explosion the remains of the plane smashed on the ground beneath the mountain! but in the titanium covered exosceleton Peter awoke with a big headake! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Mon Oct 25, 2010 5:43 pm | |
| he tryed to stand but his right leg was brokin and he fell back. roleing over hsaw that he was on the edge of a cliff thousends of feet up. turning around he saw that the only thing behind him was more cliff but it was going up wich was not were he wanted to go. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:43 am | |
| He looked down the steep cliff and began the slwo desent down! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Sun Nov 14, 2010 7:41 pm | |
| sudenly his foot sliped and he fell to his death. MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! almost it turned out that he was above some water and that pluss the exosceleton saved his life again. | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Mon Nov 15, 2010 1:35 pm | |
| What exo skeleton? that was the planes exoskeleton! | |
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jiroh Hero
Posts : 307 Post Level : 5810 Join date : 2010-05-23
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Tue Nov 16, 2010 5:59 am | |
| oh ok nyou can get rid of that so he fell to his death MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! | |
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yourself king
Posts : 332 Post Level : 5708 Join date : 2010-05-19
| Subject: Re: The FOF book! Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:31 pm | |
| then ill continues from where he fell in the water!
Peter looked around he spit water and and swam ashore! but where was he? | |
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